Creepy story - one that I think everyone can relate to at one point - that feeling of being watched. I would have like to have seen more - but I like that sort of cliff hanger ending - it just seemed to end very abruptly.
I love that you did this in black and white. I think the ending could have been a little different but I like that the last image is from the view point of your "stalker"
I like how the ending is ambiguous like you know something is coming out of the closet, looming, brooding, and then the close of your face as you open your eyes with it ending. Like you just have this ominous feeling the whole time and it really captures a horror like feel because you just get the sense that whatever came out of the closet it didn't end for you.
I liked the angle from the closet as if someone was standing there watching him. It gives us a sense that empathy when we can see what is happening from all angles.
This had a great scary element, and was well executed with traditional fear causing shots.
ReplyDeleteGood job! I wish it would have had more of a surprise at the end to make the audience jump! I liked that you made it black and white also.
ReplyDeleteGreat acting! I like how the cameras were placed and how someone else was watching you.
ReplyDeleteThe visuals were very intense! I love how you jumped back in forth between over your shoulder and the POV of the unknown enemy
ReplyDeleteCreepy story - one that I think everyone can relate to at one point - that feeling of being watched. I would have like to have seen more - but I like that sort of cliff hanger ending - it just seemed to end very abruptly.
ReplyDeleteI love that you did this in black and white. I think the ending could have been a little different but I like that the last image is from the view point of your "stalker"
ReplyDeleteI really felt like I was watching a scary movie! I like the color of the video, it really set the tone to it. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI like how the ending is ambiguous like you know something is coming out of the closet, looming, brooding, and then the close of your face as you open your eyes with it ending. Like you just have this ominous feeling the whole time and it really captures a horror like feel because you just get the sense that whatever came out of the closet it didn't end for you.
ReplyDeleteGreat camera angles, I really liked the POV shot from the closet.
ReplyDeleteReally cool seeing the door close behind you and your reaction/acting was great.
ReplyDeleteI like how your paused while brushing your teeth to draw the viewer into your story.
ReplyDeleteGreat work on this. The different camera angles work so well in telling a cohesive story.
ReplyDeleteReally liked the way you told the story. Lacks some ominous music. Wonder why black and white.
ReplyDeleteI liked the angle from the closet as if someone was standing there watching him. It gives us a sense that empathy when we can see what is happening from all angles.
ReplyDeleteThe end left me wanting. It was really good up until the end and then I wondering if it was supposed to be over.
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