I liked your different shots. Some of the background noise dominated the video though and that was distracting. There were also some shots that were out of focus. I like that we see him punching the thief, but I wish it was a close up shot so we could really get into it.
Great storyline. If I had not known the ending, it would have been a total shocker. I really liked the rain, but it seems odd he would go outside in that downpour - but I guess some people would. I liked the scene focused on his chest, but it could have used some sound effects when he hit the guy.
The shots at the beginning were shaky and out of focus. I liked the music you added at the end. It was unfortunate the last two shots were inconstant and it was pouring down rain all of a sudden.
I liked how for your edit you slowed down and warped the sound of the guy which added a foreboding feeling that was missing in the original cut. Basically I feel you cut is more successful at tricking the audience into judging the guy than the other was.
I really liked this cut but the rain came out of nowhere! I like the shots of him and the woman separately, especially how the woman was introduced. I think this would've been a great edit with the other files.
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ReplyDeleteI liked your different shots. Some of the background noise dominated the video though and that was distracting. There were also some shots that were out of focus. I like that we see him punching the thief, but I wish it was a close up shot so we could really get into it.
ReplyDeleteGood work on the edit. I like the sound effect as the flannel shirt guy approaches the girl.
ReplyDeleteVery interesting take. Some of the shots were out of focus, but it still is a great version. The rain was used well.
ReplyDeleteI thought the concept was good. It all happened pretty quickly though and I was caught off guard by the sudden down pour from one cut to the next.
ReplyDeleteThe rain was unfortunate. The robbing scene was definitely more intense.
ReplyDeleteGreat storyline. If I had not known the ending, it would have been a total shocker. I really liked the rain, but it seems odd he would go outside in that downpour - but I guess some people would. I liked the scene focused on his chest, but it could have used some sound effects when he hit the guy.
ReplyDeleteThe shots at the beginning were shaky and out of focus. I liked the music you added at the end. It was unfortunate the last two shots were inconstant and it was pouring down rain all of a sudden.
ReplyDeleteI liked how for your edit you slowed down and warped the sound of the guy which added a foreboding feeling that was missing in the original cut. Basically I feel you cut is more successful at tricking the audience into judging the guy than the other was.
ReplyDeleteI really liked this cut but the rain came out of nowhere! I like the shots of him and the woman separately, especially how the woman was introduced. I think this would've been a great edit with the other files.
ReplyDeleteI like that you introduced the girl before he starts walking to the parking lot. I think an introduction of the mugger would have helped the story.
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